Alphabet Soup Part 2 - Formative Feedback

This is the feedback that I got from the project in a group crit after the project had been completed.

Strengths

The initial research is strong and lots of ideas have been shown. The general approach to the brief is positive. You are exploring ideas and evaluating them, relating back to original/appropriate ideas.

Weaknesses

The final piece does not express the developmental work to its full potential. Final piece does not do the sketchbook justice.

Actions to be taken

Leave more time in order to the finish the final piece.